tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5325073457822952759.post26740085160390618..comments2023-10-05T01:53:51.098+13:00Comments on Hazel: Week Two: A Period of Change (1870-1950)Pt England Blogs Administrator 2014Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07845137228130364482noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5325073457822952759.post-13045209808612139322018-01-25T14:04:45.703+13:002018-01-25T14:04:45.703+13:00Hey Hazel,
This is Jade C from the Summer Learnin...Hey Hazel,<br /><br />This is Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey blogging team. <br /><br />Wow you have done a great job Hazel. You had many descriptive language features such as and many interesting adjectives, it allowed me to imagine the scene while I was reading the poem! You put yourself into the aviator's shoes and wrote the poem in his perspective, also well done for including some rhyming words in your poem. (forever and ever, though and tough) Rhyme creates rhythm when the poem is read out loud, and it makes the poem interesting for the readers to read. <br /><br />Now I can't wait to read your next blog post!<br /><br />Jade C.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com