Kia Ora Hazel! My name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
Ka Pai! It is key that in a blog post, to make it good you add a photo or video and you added a diagram. It makes the blog post all the more interesting.
I love the way you did the diagram. I also love your title. It is great that you added a walt and did a bit of an explanation of the diagram.
To improve, all I can say is that you might want more of an explanation to your post. Your thoughts & feelings wouldn't hurt to be added either. Apart from that, great post!
Did you enjoy this activity? Would you do it again?
Kia Ora Hazel!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
Ka Pai! It is key that in a blog post, to make it good you add a photo or video and you added a diagram. It makes the blog post all the more interesting.
I love the way you did the diagram. I also love your title. It is great that you added a walt and did a bit of an explanation of the diagram.
To improve, all I can say is that you might want more of an explanation to your post. Your thoughts & feelings wouldn't hurt to be added either. Apart from that, great post!
Did you enjoy this activity? Would you do it again?
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School