Kia Ora Hazel! My name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
Nice post. I really enjoyed reading through this, I also really like your cover, it is fill with colours.
It is good you shared this on a slide as it is a D.L.O (Digital Learning Object).
To improve, all I can say is maybe add some context to what this is about at the start and maybe add your thoughts and feelings to this to make it a little better,
What was your favourite part of this post? If you did it again, would you and how would you change it?
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Kia Ora Hazel!
My name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
Nice post. I really enjoyed reading through this, I also really like your cover, it is fill with colours.
It is good you shared this on a slide as it is a D.L.O (Digital Learning Object).
To improve, all I can say is maybe add some context to what this is about at the start and maybe add your thoughts and feelings to this to make it a little better,
What was your favourite part of this post? If you did it again, would you and how would you change it?
Apart from that, great post!
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
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