Hazel Space Narrative

I have friend’s their name’s Laolao and Hilary we started chatting about earth  people are polluted our lakes and ocean.But the gas from factories we decided to leave earth but we pack food and waters we hop on to are spaceship we left earth we look at every planet but not all. Laolao said “ why not mercury” “sure” we ride to mercury but it was very cold and mercury have some ice surface and mercury is the closes to the sun Laolao  and Hillary even me we were so cold that we are going to be ice blocks.We try to run but the gravity

“we made it” Hilary and Laolao said.

We made it to Venus “at least it’s not cold” said Laolao when we touch the flood our body's turn

red and we started tipping toeing back to the ship.We were out of fuel we need  water to make the spaceship Laolao had the last bottle of water we proor the water in the tank.

Then we went to the moon but their was a problem we have not wear are space suit but the helmet there were someone there it was a hanging robot that look’s around the moon if it’s safe.

Ohh we should live here it’s wonderful we need that robot to make sure that can we live here on the moon so that we can build the future and a dome.So we need that robot come on get that robot.  

We had the robot and spend our life’s on the moon people came from earth and spend their life’s too so we live happy on are new planet we call the moon super cool moon.

Hazel recount about matariki

Hazel Scary Story

WaLT: We are witing a story that how your person end up in the under ground  tunnle

It was a raining day even it was May.John cena woke up in a raining night he was about to head to the  gym but it was raining hard out that he could get wet in the rain.but he can’t risk it  he went outside to walk in the rain he was getting wet he made it to the trash and grab an old newspaper

He look at it and throw it in the trash again he find i map but it was fresh but did someone put it in the trash?.When he saw the gym he fell into a  hole.The hole lead him to the underground.The hole disappear from the roof top the lights turn off when he got there but there  were a doll that was sitting.The light was shiny at the doll John cena was going to freak out he thinks that he’s going to lose his hole life.But he had his phone and the doll was saying “ 1...2...3....4… come on John cena” the doll know john cena name he call Big Show.And then big show came and said “ what’s the problem”

“ There is a scary doll singing at me  but scary i think that i am going to waste my whole life

Can you get it away for ever” “sure”

“Thanks Big Show” “now let’s head to the gym”.

SWIMMING!

Help! I'm stuck on an island

Help! I'm stuck on an island! - Narrative Walt: Write a creative story that will capture an audience Walt: Write about yourself in third person

In the middle of the ocean there was  a big cruise ship. there was 1000 people on the big cruise ship.there were three teachers their name were Miss Scanlan,Mr Goodwin and Miss Parrant.They were having  fun they played Golf,Tennis and one thing Mr Goodwin was  very good at golf.The captain told us that we are  heading toward a big fog. But the cruise ship crash! into the rock  everyone was ok but the three teacher fell off the cruise ship but they survived they were stuck on a island  but they have been lost.It was up to them to survive the island.They were trying to find food but they fine banana’s but there were only two they had a weird face.They want to survive the island they share the banana’s.They invent  a fishing rod  it was  a stick,flax’s and a little stick for the hook.

By the time when it was sundown one  teacher had a wonderful plan.It was Miss Scanlan that had the wonderful idea.Miss Parrant and Mr Goodwin listen to Miss Scanlan.Miss scanlan plan was great they got the stuff the stuff was sticks for the bottom,leaves for the sail, the stuff that Miss Scanlan told them to get.Miss Scanlan plan was a boat they work on the boat for days and weeks until they were  finished  the boat they had test the boat for a 7 days but the last day when sunrise they were dying for thirsty the last food were banana’s but they were all gone they forget about eat and they start sailing across the great sea to get to back to New Zealand and the three teachers Told their class about the  crazy Story they had.

Hazel Now That's Thinking!

Walt: Write what we think this term's inquiry 'Now That's Thinking' is going to be about Walt: Write a recount about the immersion assembly

This term we are learning about technology And are topic is call Now That’s Thinking. Maori technology and are inquiry is  technology. Is a table and a chair  is a technology? Do you even know what is technology? Well technology is like devices for  an Example:A chair is that a technology?In a assembly Mr Burt  show us old technology and new technology.

I think  we will learn about Maori technology. Team 4 is learning about how Maori technology changed over time.I am excited to learn about technology like how Maori technology changed over time.

I want  to learn how did technology changed over time?.

Hazel Non- Camper

Hazel and Esther ANIMAL RACING!

Animal Racing!






Walt: write a narrativeWalt: add detail to our introduction (setting and characters).

At Pt england  school we are going to have a  Animal Race at the Bottom  field  and Each student chose their own animal.

My animal is a Horse. They have fast legs to run and they can run away from crocodile they were trying to attack my

horse.

My friends pick their animal Esther animal  is a  horse too and it is fast. christina animal is a lion she is so fast

That she can beat Esther  and  hazel to the finish line.We start to the line Mr baxendine was holding a gun he shot a bullet up in the sky ‘’BOOM!” then we ran as fast as our animals legs could take us but the lion was too  fast  Esther and Hazel was trying to catch up to Christina but it was no choice we couldn’t make it.while ago Christina thought should she play pokemon go or keep going.But she decided to play pokemon go...after that she fell into deep sleep but Esther and Hazel were catching up to her.while Inga and Hazel were finishing off the race they saw Christina they slowly crept slowly past her. Esther said “ look we are nearby the finishing line yay let’s go” “ wait” said Hazel Esther stop.”Never look back” I told Esther we move are legs like a lion can go. Christina woke up she saw Hazel and Esther running to the finishing line christina can not make it so far Hazel and Esther have made it to the finishing line they cheer for there name “ Esther Hazel  and Christina” “What” said Christina “i did not win the race”

No we all win.

Hazel Crazy Motat Adventures

Crazy Motat Adventures

Walt: create a plan for our writing

 

On a  bit sunny day  on a Tuesday we are going on a trip to Motat i and Lucy,Esther ,Tepaia we  got  so confident that we are going to Motat.

Mrs Moala is coming and Miss Lavakula too.We have to meet in the hall and wait for the bus to arrive.

Mr baxendine  said that  Mrs baxendine is coming  with us but Mrs baxendine is meeting us at Motat so we wait for 1 hour it take for long for the bus  to arrive we still wait.The  bus  arrive and we arrive

At Motat for 1 hour we got  so glad that we arrive at Motat the teachers said “ you guys are now at  Motat behave like you are doing now and at school too and  don’t be naughty ”  “ and 3 things  don’t get lost and don’t run  and don’t  play around too”   said Mr Baxendine

Lucy was trying to fine me but i was hiding in the mirror maze but the

Night came but it was actually daylight but Lucy was so surprised that

the mirror maze was close she had no way to find me.When Lucy saw

Me and Esther Mr Baxendine and Mrs Baxendine said “ you are not showing some respect” Esther had a weird face she was

thinking of a plan she was trying to get lost in the village and lucy too.

Tepaia was just want to  go on the Tram ride but it  was long to get back I was worried that if they get lost that can be the end the bus will arrive 2:00 pm but i think that Tepaia is going to take long on the ride.

Lucy was going in  the gaming room and she is having a blast at the game Tepaia was thinking in her head “ do i think that i am going to arrive at Motat at 3:00 pm oh no i am”.I was going to find Esther

she waste her time in the Old school room.

I find Tepaia i got her out of the Tram ride and it was 1:45 pm we have to find Lucy and Esther before 2:00 pm Esther was in the theatre Esther

Said “ i saw Lucy in the gaming and she is going to the village so hurry’’.

Lucy was at the village i was there and she  ran in the gaming room but Esther  was there she caught Lucy and we were just in time we got in the bus and went to school.

Hazel Athletics Day 2016

Athletics Day 2016

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs

WALT: Write a recount.

On  a hot sunny day we don’t get to do work  we got  to go outside we had are P.E.S ATHLETICS outside  we had to be in our house colour .pt England was full of exciting things  they said in there heads “i am going to be the good person to win and  people are cheering my name".We get to have our athletics on the field lot’s of  different  sports.     

We start the discus who ever got the most win but Mr was looking  for who got the 6s  it was amelia and Jorelle they hit the 6s.The house colours names is  hine moana, hikianalia,hokulea,Te aurere.When the trumpet go we have to rotations.

Javelin is my best kind of sport i came  1th place and  Chastyti came  2nd and ana came 3nd

I throw as hard as i can  so as ana and chastyti too.The girls didn't throw as hard  as they could.

Dodgeball was  very easy i can’t stop being  out i told someone to hit daisy because she always

hit me with the ball all time. We don’t need to do silly work  and stay in class all time after  morning tea and lunch time too.

My favourite is going to play discus i got 6 out of 6 that was fun and we don’t need to work on are

Chromebooks  Athletics was fun no work no chromebooks.

Hazel Into the cave

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.

There was 3 brothers names are zac,dave,josh they want to go to the airport   to go to Brazil because the 3 brothers want to

Go in a cave to the way to  the rainforest to see the colourful birds.When they went in the Cave they went into a maze in the cave they got lost in the cave but 1 brother Said “did you know that i have seen this place before did you guys know that”“ no we don't” said zac and dave  “hey guys but i don’t like to get in your talk but we just got lost” Shouted josh.

When they keep talking  one of the brothers had step on a trap “ watch out” shouted zac and josh “see  that why you should stay with me i am the boss

Of you now got that” said Josh “ok” said zac and dave zac and dave follow

Josh “ that's the way” said josh  josh step on a trap  but he did not see that zac and dave was scared that josh is going to be hurt  but one of the  brothers

Got hurt on the leg because there was arrow coming from the wall josh did not

See that one of his brothers got hurt josh look back  he said “ oh no zac your

Leg it's hurt” said josh  josh and dave hold him and they find  the rainforest. And got   reason  by a airplane and got back home.

Hazel The little boat

One sunny day there was a man named max he was going to the river

To search for fish.When he went fishing he saw some of his friends

He said “hi guys do you want to come fishing with me” “ ok but we

Need to get out fishing food” ask max friends “ but why” replied max

“ we can’t tell you nothing” said max friends.

Then the Crocodile was attacking the boat then max was hitting the crocodile

The crocodile went away.

Hazel Writing Narrative

      

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.

One sunny day there was a  man name Alex and his friends was  going on a trip.

His friends was making fun of him because he is scared in the kayaking under

the water was eels and  fish.They always make fun of him in  the kayaking

they go around the river until Alex scream like a girl that was funny making

him scream like a girl.

The kayaking had a hole in it Alex was not scream but his friends was screaming like girls

they were terrified of the hole in the kayaking.Water was filling up the kayaking Alex was

Laughing at his friends because they make fun at him now he laugh at him.His friends

was holding his legs and telling him “please help us we will not make fun of you again”

Said Alex friends crying.

Alex think about it “i will help you if you will stop cry hard out” shouted Alex.The kayaking was going fast to seek to the bottom of the river they were crying and saying to each other

that when they seek to the bottom of the river.Alex broke a tree and calf it like.

Hazel Volcano

Hazel Pick A Path

Hazel Wheelbarrow Race

PES Olympics Wheelbarrow Race!

WALT: write an interesting recount by writing about our feelings and the feelings of others.

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

    

Topic: PES Wheelbarrow race 

Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, world wide blog audience.

Purpose: To retell our Pt England School Wheelbarrow Race and share our thoughts on technology and cheating.

 On Tuesday when the first  bell ring I went in the classroom and put my bag away.When I saw a wheelbarrow

I told Mr Bax I said ‘Mr Bax why is a wheelbarrow in are class’ Mr Bax said ‘we are going to feed the horses’.

That seen weird something was going on here when the bell went Mr said’ 2 line outside go’ I do not know

Where we are going.     

Mr Bax was cheating with the wheelbarrow and we have to use are hand to be the wheels what a crazy idea.

I feel mad at Mr Bax for the cheating he use the Wheelbarrow.