Wednesday, 19 October 2016

Hazel Into the cave

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.

There was 3 brothers names are zac,dave,josh they want to go to the airport   to go to Brazil because the 3 brothers want to
Go in a cave to the way to  the rainforest to see the colourful birds.When they went in the Cave they went into a maze in the cave they got lost in the cave but 1 brother Said “did you know that i have seen this place before did you guys know that”“ no we don't” said zac and dave  “hey guys but i don’t like to get in your talk but we just got lost” Shouted josh.

When they keep talking  one of the brothers had step on a trap “ watch out” shouted zac and josh “see  that why you should stay with me i am the boss
Of you now got that” said Josh “ok” said zac and dave zac and dave follow
Josh “ that's the way” said josh  josh step on a trap  but he did not see that zac and dave was scared that josh is going to be hurt  but one of the  brothers
Got hurt on the leg because there was arrow coming from the wall josh did not
See that one of his brothers got hurt josh look back  he said “ oh no zac your

Leg it's hurt” said josh  josh and dave hold him and they find  the rainforest. And got   reason  by a airplane and got back home.

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