Welcome to this weeks Create task . This is Story board is about a man who was kill while eating his meal. I'm sorry that I didn't add Any thing that counts to tell the story. This summary is about mr X a man who's not a nice man. Till one day he die. Who kill mr X CLUES : the windows are broken, the floor is wet, He haves cuts on him. Broken glass of the flood. And a chef was home with him .WHAT REALLY HAPPEN TO HIM?
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3 comments:
Hi Hazel. It's Mikael from Yaldhurst School. I really like your storyboard. It's really well made. Next time I think you should say why you did what you did. Apart from that it is good.
Kia Ora Hazel, my name is Julia and I am a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School.
I like how you added pictures and clarified what you were doing and cleared up any thing that you thought people might not understand.
I like the way you explained things, it reminded me of something my little brother had a dream about.
To improve, maybe make it look cooler, or put it into a DLO (Digital Learning Object).
What did you enjoy about this activity? Apart from that great post.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Hi Hazel,
I'm Mika, a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
I like the different subject to your average, normal subject such as reading and maths. The picture's are also a nice touch too.
To improve, using a website to make your blog would be a great choice if you want to improve. Also, you may want to reread some things in the paragraph, like, instead of saying 'Till one day he die', it should be 'Till one day he died'.
I do have some form of conclusion to this mystery. I think that most people would be thinking that it would be the chef who killed him. And yes, he does look crazy, I have some evidence that he's innocent.
1. If you look on the chef's shirt, the mess on him is actually a pinkish colour and not a blood red.
2. The window was shattered with the glass inside. If the chef smashed the window, the glass would be outside.
3. The wounds on Mr. X's back are actually claw marks. As you can see, the chef has a knife and obviously doesn't have any claws.
In conclusion, I think that some sort of animal jumped to Mr X, smashing the window and killing him. Was I right or was I wrong? Hope to see your next post.
From Mika
Link to blog:http://ymsmika.blogspot.com/
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