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Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Hazel Writing Narrative


      


Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.
One sunny day there was a  man name Alex and his friends was  going on a trip.
His friends was making fun of him because he is scared in the kayaking under
the water was eels and  fish.They always make fun of him in  the kayaking
they go around the river until Alex scream like a girl that was funny making
him scream like a girl.

The kayaking had a hole in it Alex was not scream but his friends was screaming like girls
they were terrified of the hole in the kayaking.Water was filling up the kayaking Alex was
Laughing at his friends because they make fun at him now he laugh at him.His friends
was holding his legs and telling him “please help us we will not make fun of you again”
Said Alex friends crying.


Alex think about it “i will help you if you will stop cry hard out” shouted Alex.The kayaking was going fast to seek to the bottom of the river they were crying and saying to each other
that when they seek to the bottom of the river.Alex broke a tree and calf it like.

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