Animal Racing!
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At Pt england school we are going to have a Animal Race at the Bottom field and Each student chose their own animal.
My animal is a Horse. They have fast legs to run and they can run away from crocodile they were trying to attack my
horse.
My friends pick their animal Esther animal is a horse too and it is fast. christina animal is a lion she is so fast
That she can beat Esther and hazel to the finish line.We start to the line Mr baxendine was holding a gun he shot a bullet up in the sky ‘’BOOM!” then we ran as fast as our animals legs could take us but the lion was too fast Esther and Hazel was trying to catch up to Christina but it was no choice we couldn’t make it.while ago Christina thought should she play pokemon go or keep going.But she decided to play pokemon go...after that she fell into deep sleep but Esther and Hazel were catching up to her.while Inga and Hazel were finishing off the race they saw Christina they slowly crept slowly past her. Esther said “ look we are nearby the finishing line yay let’s go” “ wait” said Hazel Esther stop.”Never look back” I told Esther we move are legs like a lion can go. Christina woke up she saw Hazel and Esther running to the finishing line christina can not make it so far Hazel and Esther have made it to the finishing line they cheer for there name “ Esther Hazel and Christina” “What” said Christina “i did not win the race”
No we all win.
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