Monday, 19 February 2018

How to save Money? and Why do we need money?

WALT: follow the structure of an explanation                How to save money?/Why do we need money?
It’s  important   to save  money.You can save money in your bank account or in credit card and more how to save money.You can buy lots but what about your friends and families? there's great deal that’s not cheap but you want to save up there’s always your bank to add up your best deal you can buy your favourite deals you just need to add up.Need money to save and buy like Toys or Food and other things there's great deals to spend but be aware of the price.

Money is fun to spend but you need some money to save.Don’t just waste money on online you need your  money to buy extra foods.Why do we need money? We need money to buy power,foods,house,tech power and others to buy.You can sell stuff that you don’t  need it’s easy to fundraise for your family to go somewhere or buy extra foods and extra toys and furnitures.Don’t be wilde over money you just need to ask your parents very nice and wait for their answers it doesn’t matter what they say be grateful what you earn.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Hazel,

    You have had some great ideas about saving money - ka pai! Next time we will work more on structuring our writing so that you have an introduction, body paragraphs and a conclusion.