Kia Ora Honor, my name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like the way you decorated all the slides as it made it really fun to look at. The only things was, some of the words were hard to read, so maybe just check that.
This reminded me of when I was younger and we would learn about different holidays and why we have them.
Do you think you'd ever celebrate Thanksgiving?
To improve, all I can say is add what this post is about and maybe just a little bit of how you thought it went.
Kia Ora! I'm a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School. That looks nice. I like the way you have added a lot of details and the way you designed this DLO. THis was really fun to look at and read , I like the way you highlighted it so we could read it.
I enjoy the holidays a lot what about you? Maybe next time you could say where you got your information from and a bit more about them But apart from that I think its really good.
What one is your favorite? Was this fun to make? Plus I liked how you added the videos
Hey Honor My name is Chloe I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. I really like how you have added some decorations to the front of your slide. Maybe next time you could make them yourself? Like putting different colour stars all around?
I like how you have highlighted the words so then we see it, that's very helpful. What holidays are your favorite? Mine is probably the Christmas one, because its very long and there are plenty of fun activities. Next time you could write a description so then we can understand what you are doing a little better?
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Kia Ora Honor,
my name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like the way you decorated all the slides as it made it really fun to look at. The only things was, some of the words were hard to read, so maybe just check that.
This reminded me of when I was younger and we would learn about different holidays and why we have them.
Do you think you'd ever celebrate Thanksgiving?
To improve, all I can say is add what this post is about and maybe just a little bit of how you thought it went.
Apart from that, great post.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Kia Ora!
I'm a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
That looks nice. I like the way you have added a lot of details and the way you designed this DLO.
THis was really fun to look at and read , I like the way you highlighted it so we could read it.
I enjoy the holidays a lot what about you?
Maybe next time you could say where you got your information from and a bit more about them
But apart from that I think its really good.
What one is your favorite?
Was this fun to make?
Plus I liked how you added the videos
- Kind regards Grace
Kind regards - Grace
Hey Honor
My name is Chloe I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like how you have added some decorations to the front of your slide. Maybe next time you could make them yourself? Like putting different colour stars all around?
I like how you have highlighted the words so then we see it, that's very helpful. What holidays are your favorite? Mine is probably the Christmas one, because its very long and there are plenty of fun activities.
Next time you could write a description so then we can understand what you are doing a little better?
Kind regards - Chloe
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