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There was 3 brothers names are zac,dave,josh they want to go to the airport to go to Brazil because the 3 brothers want to
Go in a cave to the way to the rainforest to see the colourful birds.When they went in the Cave they went into a maze in the cave they got lost in the cave but 1 brother Said “did you know that i have seen this place before did you guys know that”“ no we don't” said zac and dave “hey guys but i don’t like to get in your talk but we just got lost” Shouted josh.
When they keep talking one of the brothers had step on a trap “ watch out” shouted zac and josh “see that why you should stay with me i am the boss
Of you now got that” said Josh “ok” said zac and dave zac and dave follow
Josh “ that's the way” said josh josh step on a trap but he did not see that zac and dave was scared that josh is going to be hurt but one of the brothers
Got hurt on the leg because there was arrow coming from the wall josh did not
See that one of his brothers got hurt josh look back he said “ oh no zac your
Leg it's hurt” said josh josh and dave hold him and they find the rainforest. And got reason by a airplane and got back home.
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