Tuesday, 9 May 2017

Help! I'm stuck on an island

Help! I'm stuck on an island! - Narrative
Walt: Write a creative story that will capture an audience Walt: Write about yourself in third person

In the middle of the ocean there was  a big cruise ship. there was 1000 people on the big cruise ship.there were three teachers their name were Miss Scanlan,Mr Goodwin and Miss Parrant.They were having  fun they played Golf,Tennis and one thing Mr Goodwin was  very good at golf.The captain told us that we are  heading toward a big fog. But the cruise ship crash! into the rock  everyone was ok but the three teacher fell off the cruise ship but they survived they were stuck on a island  but they have been lost.It was up to them to survive the island.They were trying to find food but they fine banana’s but there were only two they had a weird face.They want to survive the island they share the banana’s.They invent  a fishing rod  it was  a stick,flax’s and a little stick for the hook.

By the time when it was sundown one  teacher had a wonderful plan.It was Miss Scanlan that had the wonderful idea.Miss Parrant and Mr Goodwin listen to Miss Scanlan.Miss scanlan plan was great they got the stuff the stuff was sticks for the bottom,leaves for the sail, the stuff that Miss Scanlan told them to get.Miss Scanlan plan was a boat they work on the boat for days and weeks until they were  finished  the boat they had test the boat for a 7 days but the last day when sunrise they were dying for thirsty the last food were banana’s but they were all gone they forget about eat and they start sailing across the great sea to get to back to New Zealand and the three teachers Told their class about the  crazy Story they had.

1 comment:

  1. Hazel, this is the coolest story ever! You picture made me laugh so much, I love it. I love your descriptive words like crash and sundown. Good job.