Hello Hazel, It is Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School/Rimu Class. This blog post stood out to me because you gave a discription and you also added a slide. I think that you did great. When I saw this blog with the title:Winter Cough I thought that u had a cough. I have a question, is this your set work? Maybe next time you could add what this is instead of just putting your slide in. But other than that Ka Pai Bridget
Kia Ora Hazel, my name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
Ka Pai! I love this (probably because I like maths). You have added in your slides which is great.
This reminded me of when I was doing riddle/math problem solving work and that was super fun.
To improve, all I can say is maybe add some questions for your readers. Another thing is maybe adding a bit more context and your feelings towards this activity. But, good job on linking your friends blogs.
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Hello Hazel,
It is Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School/Rimu Class. This blog post stood out to me because you gave a discription and you also added a slide. I think that you did great. When I saw this blog with the title:Winter Cough I thought that u had a cough. I have a question, is this your set work? Maybe next time you could add what this is instead of just putting your slide in.
But other than that
Ka Pai
Bridget
Kia Ora Hazel,
my name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
Ka Pai! I love this (probably because I like maths). You have added in your slides which is great.
This reminded me of when I was doing riddle/math problem solving work and that was super fun.
To improve, all I can say is maybe add some questions for your readers. Another thing is maybe adding a bit more context and your feelings towards this activity. But, good job on linking your friends blogs.
Apart from that, great blog post.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
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