Since 2013 it was april the 1st and I was 6 years old I was in room 6.Things change over the past years but this is important because I like to remember the past so I like to write this story so this is the start.
I was in Ms She classroom 6 It was time to pick our group for fiafia I was so confuse what kids was doing.You know that kids like 6 years old gets confused so that’s me I got confused “ Hazel Come and get a paper to put down your Fiafia choice” I follow the other kids getting a paper I ask one of my friends Lucy I ask “where do you get your paper” she said over there by the table.
Soon I got a paper to put down my group for Fiafia I made a wise choice I pick kapa haka.It was my First choice kapa haka and my 2nd choice was niue and my last choice was cook island Ok ok I most forgot my choices but I knew kapa haka was one of my choice.I really got confuse.It was pack up time sitting down on the mat sitting up ready to go home.When my mum pick me up I told her about fia fia this is the words i said to my mum “ Mum I do faifai”
Now it was the 2nd of april the choice that was decided for me was kapa haka.It’s really good to be in kapa haka.Our maori teacher is Ms Tito,I was excited to be in kapa haka but since i went in the class.When we begin the warm up I think it was the ele the maori ele thing.
After the days I just don’t want you viewers so bored so I’ll skip the days.It was the last day before the big fia fia just the last day of class.My mum and dad pick me up,It was 5: 45 pm time to go school to change but I was at home still.My parents drop me and my sister and brother too I wasn’t the only one at school.I was at my change room really to perform on stage Ms tito remind us to smile so bright.
The best part is going up on the stage.Soon as I went up the stage It felt like heaven well not pass on you know what I mean.And my favourite part when I was confuse on the stage. You Can't see me but i'm there.
1 comment:
Hi Hazel,
I love the way you describe your younger self; the way that you spoke and felt at school. This is really sweet and I can see that it was a really special memory for you. You have structured your writing well at a paragraph level and included the details that the reader needed to understand the events you described. Next time we will work on keeping your sentences really clear to make it even easier for your reader to understand.
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