PES Olympics Wheelbarrow Race!
WALT: write an interesting recount by writing about our feelings and the feelings of others.
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
Topic: PES Wheelbarrow race
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, world wide blog audience.
Purpose: To retell our Pt England School Wheelbarrow Race and share our thoughts on technology and cheating.
On Tuesday when the first bell ring I went in the classroom and put my bag away.When I saw a wheelbarrow
I told Mr Bax I said ‘Mr Bax why is a wheelbarrow in are class’ Mr Bax said ‘we are going to feed the horses’.
That seen weird something was going on here when the bell went Mr said’ 2 line outside go’ I do not know
Where we are going.
Mr Bax was cheating with the wheelbarrow and we have to use are hand to be the wheels what a crazy idea.
I feel mad at Mr Bax for the cheating he use the Wheelbarrow.
4 comments:
hey hazel
great effort on your wheelbarrow story you are very smart. I really like it great story.
from:Esther
Hi hazel
I really like your story you made good seances.
It was so good because I was happy to see it you did a good gob.
from
room 9 Lit
hey hazel
great effort on your wheelbarrow story you are very smart. I really like it great story.what was your favorite part about the wheelbarrow race? from:Esther.
Hi hazel you have writ in an amazing story and it looks so tidy to see your wonderful story and i like the way you have made good story so keep up the amazing work.
from ayla.
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